A decent enough story but the incorrect and overuse of commas were very distracting. With the author being an English teacher, I expected better written sentences. It seemed like every other sentence had an unnecessary comma. For someone who has knowledge of how to use those pesky little buggers, it was difficult to ignore the billion used throughout the story.

I'm gonna be bumpin' this in my ride with pride!~ Corey has balls of steel! Angelic to the core is an understatement. Epic, epic entertainment. Engage at warp factor 7 strate 2 heaven! One love. <3